Black Poetry : Sight in color

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  1. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today I see in color
    or ‘couleur’ as the French ‘parlez’
    my vision no longer denies
    the sheer bliss of genuine imagery
    yesssssss
    to distinguish vividly
    simulations and legitimations
    is to dissect
    scrutinize
    with closed eyes
    and find thousands and one
    infinitesimal lies
    that infest our game time
    and function as defense for idealistic lives

    today I see in color
    not to say I was blind
    but I lacked sight within not my world seers
    but my hindsight
    I overlooked the isolated future
    and went back
    and got lost in the bygones of the elapsed
    to find that yesterday I was trapped
    I lacked Afro centricity
    that which elucidates my lack of photosensitivity
    my inability to see all that I could be
    today I arise and realize
    the lack there of lay solely on me
    I chose to live NOT idealistically but to grab hold of reality
    thus, I have regained my pigment loving capability
    and today I see...
    today I see In colour



    LUVIN*EVERY*BLACK*INCH*OF*ME
     
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    beautifully put
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    through ya rainbow
    i see of colors dis was very beautiful
     
  4. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Purplemoons, thanks for tha line, I meant to say you got great stuff on tha boards...there's not enough time in my day to read em all but I gotta say what mine eyes have devoured was worth the read...


    I'm just sayin...
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$, you never fail to make me feel rich...your 'butta luv'...



    I'm just sayin...
     
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    I enjoyed the flow

    feelin'it souldeep
    Coco
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    Danke, Danke
     
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