Black Poetry : Sick and Tired

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BaduX, Jun 9, 2003.

  1. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Never doubt in the dark What GOD told you in the light
    My body is the journey
    My soul is the bus that travels through my body
    My heart is a dark endless dungon
    and theres a dragon burning

    I have to over come my supressors and
    Realize that i have to come back
    to myself at the end of the day.

    As I lay graciously on the floor
    confused, my mind packed with B.S.
    Thinking will I ever go on
    were trouble made its home and never leaves
    Looking for a new day
    to let loose and say hurray.

    It may seem like I am a fan to trouble of socity.
    I hate the game for every
    wrong doings that were done to me!
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi,

    I love this!! Very powerful!! Beautifully expressed!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte scribe!!
     
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    OKAY...
    let's try this

    i'm SICK AND TIRED
    of being SICK AND TIRED
    of listening to those who cried
    THEY PLAYED FOUL ON ME
    coz i believe
    trouble comes to those who align themselves with
    the neighborhood of woes
    like lovers
    and playaz
    and haters of the aforementioned societies
    that hold biases against me
    and i believe
    all the liars who lied on me
    must belong to the same
    danger zone stronghold society
    coz i can't break the lines of communications
    that keep them informed of lies they spread about me
    and keeps me out of their inner circle of
    B.S.
    now, i confess
    i'm SICK AND TIRED
    of today leaving and
    tomorrow coming and
    yesterday and next week
    and all the things i don't want to see
    and i'm sure you're
    SICK AND TIRED of me
    and my idiotic ramblings
    so, i'll STOP.:)

    THANKS for flowing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! tyte flowz baller u hit it on point too
    dis was aswesome
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Both of ya'll had good flows....Once again Badu, I say to you, Keep ya head up!!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think ya'll are on to somethin' here. lol
    I hecka felt the vent/flow like a warm wind
    in a spot of some merciless sun blazin' realities.

    so if I may...

    I getz sick and tired
    ticked I'm wired
    like so much explosives
    yet feelings like this
    ain't nuttin but corrosive
    at most it's the closest
    I need to be to crazy
    shoutin' shade, but shady?
    nawl butit'sall gravy
    can't fade the
    haters
    now look what hell made, see?
    butit's you and me baby
    you and me my peoples
    quick to debate the
    evils we seen lately
    inaquest to be equal
    I seek no
    matter less than what's real
    enough still
    that it's just the appeal of
    what's true that moves me
    truly
    andthebeauty of it all
    is despite the downpressors
    we can still stand tall
    empty hands and all

    Thanx for the vent session
     
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