Black Poetry : shut up

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Jul 31, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    deep sigh
    so tired of hearing u complain
    over and over again
    bout **** that happened
    in the past

    so tired of the intro
    i know when its coming
    all the complining, moaning and groaning
    come on man

    how many times i gotta hear it
    already apologized a thousand times
    supposed holding on to the pain
    makes u feel alive!

    stop!
    i can't take it
    u pointing the finger at me
    constantly, the wounds tryna heal
    but u keep making it bleed, bleed!

    u don't need to remind me
    how i messed up
    cause u did too
    now enough is enough

    i cried a river
    bent over backwards and kissed the sky
    but u won't let me forget
    u won't just let it die, die, die

    dam, okay imma get the sunglasses
    i broke in a rage
    a million im sorries
    i thought u forgave?

    i dun gave up the bottle
    aint that enough
    u aint gave up nuthin
    just making our thang ruff...

    im sick of it, man
    tha look in your eye
    still accusatory
    when i let it ride

    u never said ur sorry
    u done some wrong too
    but man im not so petty and
    keep bringin it up to you!

    so if you can't forgive me
    then u can't forgive yourself
    im just sick of all the childishness
    put the insecurities on the shelf!

    shut up!
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes!!! u read my mind!!!
    great piece...
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey MORE
    feeling you on this
    it comes a time
    when you gotta
    say it out loud
    very nice
    Peace
     
  4. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak on it :)
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tell it gurl:)
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like your flow More!
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yet it all be heard sistah say it say it !!
    wow tyteeeeeeeeeeeee
     
  8. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak truth sista,i'm digging it!
     
  9. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another great piece. can't wait to hear MORE! :)

    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
  10. kimrari

    kimrari New Member MEMBER

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    that was awesome.

    im new here and cant really write. may i ask how long u have been writing?

    keep up the great work
     
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