Black Poetry : SHUT UP NOW

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, May 9, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want you to shut up don't speak don't say a word
    There's something inside of you that I long to know
    But I can't get to it or see it because you talk so much
    I want to touch your soul
    I want to feel your essence
    I want you to let go
    But you won't you talk and go on and on
    Trying to hide the obvious inside of you
    To keep the world from knowing you
    Or maybe as a front to keep
    someone like me from loving you
    I can't allow myself to act as though I don't feel this spectacular
    draw to you
    It's in everything you say and do

    But I want you to shut up and let me feel you
    Let me take you in
    Let me become more to you than just a friend
    Let me get close to your light
    You can't hide behind selfish ways tyring to
    enclose yourself in a trap or maze
    I see through you
    Let me be the one to be with you
    On a deeper more spiritual level

    But first I just want you to shut up
    So I can listen to your soul
    Your heart beat so bold and then
    I want to take you there
    :zipit: :zipit: :zipit:

    Silence is golden
    It is the father of truth
    The soul is the womb in which it grows
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice now hush hush !
     
  3. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm quiet just lookin for someone to look inside of me
     
  4. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was so cool...love it !

    Shhhh... I'm sure somebody's looking Poet :hearts4:

    Much Peace to you,
    Akilah
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Digign' this quiet storm, raging in our midst!
     
  6. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know exactly whut you mean!!!!!!!!!!!

    if this aint a page outta my life ,i dunno whut is..!!nice peice poet!!
     
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    ephlat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    are there supposed to be spelling eras? it was nice besides that.
     
  8. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    umm... you mean ERRORS...don't you ? j/k *heehee!!!* :huh:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's quite amazing how well you can hear when one is silent...I feel ya
     
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    re:Shut

    Very Nice.
     
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