Black Poetry : Shut Up And Listen Can You hear The Wind Blowing Through The Universal Space Of My Mi

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  1. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shut Up And Listen Can You hear The Wind Blowing Through The Universal Space Of My Mind
    By Jacqueline Amos

    Shut up and Listen
    Can you hear the blowing of the wind?
    through the Universal Space of my mind,
    In the peaceful place of intensity.
    If you shut up, and listen,
    perhaps you will have a chance,
    to enjoy a music,
    that you may not have known,
    existed at all course.

    Can you hear the bellowing sand?
    Rising up from the depths of all humanity,
    crying out to the ever-lasting life.
    In hopes of a vocal response.
    What a shame that we have come to a point,
    with such calamity,
    that we can no longer hear the truth.

    Shut up and Listen. For the earths speaks,
    as she agonize from the pressure placed upon her,
    by our hasty stupidity. Can you hear
    the celestial strings of unity;
    being placed in by our continuous,
    efforts to peace the veils of times.

    Shut up and Listen perhaps you will hear.
    The spirits of ancient times,
    Begging us to be steal.
    Shut up and Listen,
    and perhaps you will hear,
    the many deaths of all creations,
    by our hands greed, selfishness,
    mans in humanity to man.


    Mans respect for all creations,
    crippling aloud,
    praying that we will hear.
    The pain, The pain, The Pain,
    The Tears, The Tears, The Tears The Voices.
    The Voices....

    copywriter 2002
    Jacqueline Amos
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  2. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very interesting....lovin' tha imagery!!

    flow on poet!


    1 luv
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queen,

    you have skills definitely. i'm listening. keep flowing.

    blak
     
  4. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You
     
  5. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm listining..............lol

    nice job
     
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    What can I say....?
    KEep it commin.
     
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