Black Poetry : SHUT UP AGAIN (I'm demanding)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soulful2006, Aug 9, 2005.

  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm demanding that you
    Release unto me the very being of what it is
    That you desire to give to me
    To hold with me to
    Share in the midnight hour
    When you fell like no one else
    Will understand
    What you're going through

    Shut up and let me explore
    The core the very thing
    I mentioned to you before
    And the very person you
    Desire to be

    Shut up now
    And feel the moment
    The feeling, the time
    Is now to show you how
    Beautiful your silence can be

    I'm demanding that you show
    Who you really are
    Shine your bright blessed star
    Show me how deep you really are
    I'm demanding you heed my call
    Let me catch you
    Before you fall
    I see you inside of all that you hide behind

    SO........
    Shut up again
    I don't think you
    Heard me the first time
    Shut up again
    And begin to truly speak light
    For the first time

    Shut up again
    Cause behind all that you
    Cover up with I know
    You know that we are
    Destined to be more than just
    Friends
    SO
    Shut Up
    And let me venture to your core
    and love can now certainly begin

    For those who just don't understand you don't have love because you won't let love get close to you. Eventually you will see that you can not speak forver to hide . When finally you do shut up you'll see there is no need to search for peace of mind.......it was always there waiting for you. :shutup: :yo: :thinking:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhh well said and done this piece speaks loud and clear
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats all I aim to get out to the world that you don't have to hide from the positives in life.
     
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    peace sis,

    nice scribe.............
     
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    Sometimes we tend to trip our own selves up, getting in the way of what we truly feel inside. I really liked the way you worded this poet.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just trying to help a friend see the light that's all I'll keep adding shut up poems until he does as stubborn as he is it may take a while. Wish me luck :)
     
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