Quiet Poetry Lounge : Shroud

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Jan 7, 2013.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The shroud has always had to be seen and felt through the wind coming.
    When the sence can be based upon...
    The smartest of all have to borrow sisters before enabling herself to structure.
    Not always to be over
    I's but under the breath of the unspoken options.
    Generational changes
    but the work for obtaining security will forever be
    sought.
    To come upon at any time
    warrented.
     
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    Chevron Dove going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    always looking forward to see what you bring.

    This is deep and thought provoking.
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You for Reading!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done