Black Poetry : SHRIEK!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Aug 3, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GOD! I could Shriek...

    Today has been the worst...
    And now my face feels so hot...

    and the flames, the flames...
    they just seem to burn
    and I could claw the skin off of my body
    and shriek!

    Today I wished I was
    a Tsunami...
    today I could see myself
    unleashing my watery fury and ugliness on
    everyone and anyone that rubbed me the
    wrong way; anyone who even looked at me
    crookedly...
    D***! I could literally shriek!

    Today I could have committed...
    I could have done murderous things to
    those I affectionately call "My Enemies,"
    things you only see in horror novels and sci-fi
    movies.

    The thought of filleting someone’s entire skin
    tissue off and boiling them alive...
    Ooooh, that is a little grotesque, nevertheless
    its one of the many things I imagined.

    I'm in such a
    red haze and I'm clawing for
    the surface.
    Its like...
    Well s***! I don't know how to describe it,
    but...
    well....I could just shriek!

    Its like this great pressure...
    now there's me trying to keep it all in,
    trying to stay friendly and cheerful...
    Lord have mercy, I think my mask is about to slip!
    Oooooh Hell! I've got to release this pent up aggravation
    before I hit some body with a sledgehammer!

    Hmmmhmmmmm please don't bother me!
    Don't ask me if I’m all right or even what’s wrong!
    let me simmer, boil then be calm.
    Let this n**** get cool on his own time.
    Just let me open my mouth and give a good
    earth-shaking shriek!

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    "Son of the DayStar" Publishing
    "Poeta Nascitur, Non Fit"
    "Poets are born, not made"
    ~PropheticNsyght
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Oooooh! That was way
    down deep!

    I'm not gonna ask but
    I will say that I felt
    the wrath! :bomb:

    Tyte drop!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!
    shriek on and make it be felt.
    tyte hot drop ya pen is blazzin
     
  4. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many thanks!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    flow head on and release........
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Appreciate the love pa! As always you are great.
     
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    Whoa, let it out, let it out. And we will enjoy it. Nice drop.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, that was intense. You must feel better after that...If not, continue. If so, continue to flow anyway....:)
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much ma. Much love!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much love and respect! Thank you so much!