Black Poetry : Shower Talk & Stuff

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by AACOOLDRE, Sep 12, 2004.

  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHOWER TALK & Stuff

    Whenever a girl talks of a late hour Shower
    Your invited to show off some erectable Power
    It’s a dare do you have balls to unlock the Door
    Pick up the subtlety she lays on the Floor

    There’s a difference between
    Men who get Vitamin D & boys getting weaned
    Those getting Nun meaning not Any
    Those reading between the lines of similes
    Strike Gold with Many

    Many scoreboards full of girl Scout names
    For all Interrupters of female word games
    Or body language or its exposure
    Are Invitations to your body to get closer

    When she bids over it’s a Love call Moon
    Howl like a Wolf & cradle it soon
    Read the sign language for Ladies who are deft
    One-eyed Snakes crept and leave no fruit left
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess we can miss out on a lot when we can't take a subtle hint huh? Great word play in this, very clever poet.
     
  3. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you have this wonderful wit flowing
    ladies/girls got to keep an eye on you..
    cause you definitely be watching, and listening
    and thinking...
     
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    Oh, wee! I'm gonna have watch you.......... :wink: Good flow.
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u said it all right here keep da flow in motion
    tyte scribing
     
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    this was a tight flow i enjoyed this read... :angel1:
     
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    Nice to have you
    back flowing with us...
    Nice work!

    Keep it rocking poet...
    Sage
     
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