Black Poetry : SHOW YOURSELF

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Jun 29, 2008.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dwelling in my thoughts occupying my mind

    I revel in the possibities of you and I

    Little girl grins always tend to trace my face

    And sparkles illuminate from my eyes

    Memories still yet to be created although

    The cognitation is mentally stimulating and breath taking

    My perceptions are all that they are

    Theres no need to continue to hide from me

    Show yourself…

    reality is the environment for me

    how can these thoughts

    become all the beautiful things

    my mental only sees and my heart craves to feel

    its impossible for me to demonstrate

    my abilities to love you

    if you are only a figment of my imagination

    ever so patiently I wait

    whom ever you may be

    one thing I know for sure

    I will know its you

    When the time comes and

    You’ve grown tired and weary

    of being a concept of my conception

    You will show yourself to me​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The man of your dreams, the one who is meant to be, just look what he has in store. This was quite lovely poetess.
     
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    soulosophy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely beautiful. This brought a smile to my heart. This is what its about that we each take the time to work on healing ourselves, preparing ourselves, transforming ourselves to be ready to receive the love and attract the right partner who is deserving of our essence and we are deserving of theirs. Light attracts Light...and wow, how brightly you shine.

    Peace & Blessings
    1UL
     
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    if you dream him, he will come

    once you prepare yourself to be the woman worth recieving the man of your fondest dreams, the karmatic power that guides us all will happily let your paths cross.

    you write from an open heart and mind
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    Thank you so much for your words of kindness
    I just need him to get out of my dreams.


    soulosophy:
    I very much appreciate you taking the time
    to read my piece and for the really nice comments.



    Sha'iyn:
    Thank you sweetie....I so appreciate your thoughts
    and opinions. And I always get a kick out of
    you posting on my pieces.



    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I know he smile from miles away as this tune continues to play
     
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