Black Poetry : Show Me

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stuck, fixated, mesmerized, by
    Highlights of heaven permeating from your deep brown eyes
    Overstating my obvious attraction
    Wondering if you're aware of the need that just seeing you caresses (within me)

    Mere satisfaction cannot even appear to describe the
    Everlasting appeal of your soul-stirring vibe

    see, you show me
    that's right, you show me

    you show me the things, that ecstactically ring in the
    harmonious melody of you
    bringing music to my ears, savored smiles to my face
    uplifting me, drifting me off (at your pace)
    into that pleasure zone
    the soul/body/mind wholly combined
    into a feeling succintly called love
    (really a place just inches south of heaven)

    Sensational goddess, creation of all my appeal
    How distinctly you reveal a personality I long to revel in
    Overwhelming, and rich, satisfying, until I see you:
    Woman-queen of my deepest reality

    Make me a part of you, so I can
    Eternally be sustained by the passion of you

    see, you show me
    mmmhmm, you show me

    you show me delectable portions of you feminine mystique
    showing off exotic charms and attributes that run so smooth, and deep
    it's like that 1st morning Adam woke up lying next to a sleeping Eve
    I feel his fulfillment
    this permanent sensation to latch onto you, for you are my duration
    through storms and through pain
    it's been so clear that you're the
    uplifting addition to each of my life's elevations

    Supreme dream supplier
    Hopefully, you realize that
    Of all the true blessings I have, I cherish you most
    Woman mated with my soul, the one who

    Means absolutely
    Everything, simply because

    you show me love
     
  2. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tarheel, you have some kind of AWSOME pen, or keyboard, whichever. I really liked this piece, very cleva' with the title running through. Heart and soul also ran through very clearly. How close to heaven on earth it would be, if we all were with our soul mates.
     
  3. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gaylee,

    Thanks for the read, and the praise....much love and mutual appreciation for your work (we must have the same kind of keyboard :) )....keep scribin'

    MJ
     
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    Look now you show me how you flow spree now I know G

    Look now you show me how you flow spree now I know G
    View of a author is new and proper flow smooth like copper
    I groove try be a Hip-Hopper, dropper of verse and stopper
    Of the worse crime so I disperse rhyme
     
  5. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :cool: TYGHT MADD, really TYGHT

    Thanks for the response, I love your flow. Keep scribin'

    MJ
     
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    SistaMoon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmph mmmph mmph......you really have a way wit words...That piece was breathtaking.
     
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