Black Poetry : Show Me The Way

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Jul 27, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The journey to your love can be easy
    if only you’d show me the way

    I’ve given you every indication and
    every sign that I am ready to be your
    man in the future—yet I can not visualize
    where I am headed with you at present

    I’m caught up in your hypnotic weave
    of speculations, hesitations, and
    manifestations of lover’s games you
    sometimes play unknowingly

    I’m confused, never amused, by your
    on again-off again romantic lead

    When one looks, one never really finds
    But help me internalize what I’ve “not”
    been searching for—truth in loving you

    Let me see and feel a love so pure that it
    reaches far beyond an ordinary infatuated
    man’s grasp—dispelling all preconceived
    notions that this is merely a casual concern

    I ask of you now to reveal your inner beauty
    Show me how real your love can truly be
    Because mine is and continues to be sincere

    Baby I want you and I need you inside of me
    Let go your mind to the possibilities of a
    “you and I” love affair—strong and deep
    Show me then, the way to your heart
     
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    GQ!!! Master of eloquent verses!!!! I know she hears you and is ready to answer you!!!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    GQ

    true playa style

    i like how you flow on that love tip

    if i was a female i would have to step to you
    but i'm not so i'll just give dap and a pat on the back



    PEACE

    DSSNY
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    danggggg!

    this was tight!


    watching the poets step to 'dis

    pd
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bish, So'Ja, PD, & Cindy

    Thanks for the feel!!!!

    Cindy, queen I dug your reply much much!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FOOTSTEPS IN DA DARK

    YA QUEEN NOT ONLY HEAR U SHE FEEL U AS WELL
    WHEN THE CLOCK HIT 12 AND THE LIGHT FALL INTO
    DARKNESS SHE WILL SHO HER SELF UPON U AND
    GUIDE U UNTO HER LOVE .........WITHIN MY VISION.
    BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN:D
     
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