Quiet Poetry Lounge : Shoulda Been

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by serenti-poet, May 26, 2004.

  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shoulda been sumthin special
    Shoulda been sumthin great
    Shoulda been tha perfect husband
    Shoulda made you stay
    Shoulda been alot of things
    INstead you decided to be just one
    Tha man who stole my heart
    And had balls enough to run

    Shoulda been...

    :crying:
     
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    Concisely flowed directly to the point. Maybe it should have been, but it's an open door to the rest of your life, let it shine.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    shoulda been that perfect one
    shoulda been forgiven sweet
    shoulda not made da heart weak
    shoulda not wave goodbye
    I shoulda held closer
    but life full of concloser tales
    see u striped my soul
    and took my heart
    u knew this where we start

    Tyte poeticlly sprayed flow sistah lovin it
    words kissed da page wit reality
     
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    much love dear sister
    feeling your flow indeed
    Peace~n~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    nice to have you back on the page Serenti...
    and keeping it tyte as always I see...

    Great reading you!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Serenti-poet

    Nice...very nice.....

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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