Black Poetry : Should I?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, May 16, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I missed you.....
    ****, I missed the way you feel
    I missed the way you touched me
    This is an illusion; this ain't real
    But **** we are...
    Or it's more like we were
    Do you remember what happened?
    All because of her...
    And you too "Papi"
    Wait, I forgot that's not your name
    I stripped you of that title
    You have yourself to blame.
    I just want you to hold me,
    Though my mind is telling me no
    My mind is slowly losing the battle
    Cuz my body is saying "Just Go"
    Remembe that first time Boo?
    :sigh: you entered me so slow...
    You took your time;dang it hurt
    I thought our friendship would grow
    But alas, things were different
    And the rest of my life has changed
    I'm stuck with this for life
    But it won't make me deranged
    I won't die
    Cuz I have no spirit or soul
    I can get over it
    But hatred has swallowed me whole
    I still love you
    And I fu6kin don't know why
    I just wanted you to love me
    Instead you make me cry...
    .....Should I?
    Should I make love to you while you **** me?
    Or should I just forget?
    So that no man can ever judge me.
    I was a good kid ,K
    I tought I was read..
    Now you've hit it and left
    ...GOD, is there anyone who won't use me?
    .........I don't wanna ****..just sit down and hold me



    *Just flowin...it's been a shitty day(again)
     
  2. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mm...the end of a relationship is always a painful thing...heart-felt drop, poet.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte poem........keep ya head up...much love :)
     
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    nini08 Active Member MEMBER

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    i am so sorry u had to go through something like that. just know that all men r not triflin like that. i pray that u will find the strength to keep going and flowin to dissipate the hate. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feelin u here so sad to know u when through this maze
    but surely ya heart will mend and true love will shine
    keep flow with ya head up
     
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