Black Poetry : should i will i can i do i ?

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    should i stay
    should i go
    should i play
    should i lay
    should i make it right
    should i take da turn
    should i

    will i burn
    will i yearn
    will i rise
    will i fall
    will i nake da call
    will i

    can i dance
    can i slide
    can i ride
    side by side
    can i fine peace
    can i stay afloat
    is it really a joke

    am i real
    can i feel
    should i pray
    will i stay
    am i needed
    who am i
    live to love
    i try and try

    from da hour glass
    the mirror image
    i see da answers
    eyeing before me
    i ask da magic of
    all and listen as it
    make da call
    what was said
    i can not tell
    but what was said
    i holla hell yeah !

    sitting in my slumber
    da chamber walls
    close, my body instill
    soul seem froze
    the tingle inside
    the moment of hope
    cascadig out feelin
    of da strokes
    reaching deep
    seeking the truth
    i even call betty & ruth
    getting loose my choice
    to make from da mirror
    what it say
    i look to da depth
    da moment of tyme
    how my heart light up
    in shine , speaking
    calling and asking
    and deeply awnsering
    so i know yes i know
    calling up sadie
    calling Mrs.Southener
    asking da underworld
    asking above what i heard
    was pure sweet love
    so now i have to make up
    da mind of confession !
    maybe i'll just bash :bam:
    all mental visions and just
    sit on the tolet and :explode:
    but :luvu: still
    :callme: u might have the answer!
    :sand:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh lawd, those last lines done made me laugh my ayuss off.

    $$RICH$$y, I lubs ya. And I do love this short-line style. The whole poem, serious part and crazy part, is dope.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know Rich i love your mind as twisted as it maybe
    a true poet a gift for words

    i am so loving this twist as well
    flow head on you be the one fo sho!!!
    i be feeling ya......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz gempis sometime to mix it up makes it sweeter and juicy and da
    answer yet known ......guess i'll keep looking in da mirror.

    thankz angel sometime a twist is what it takes to seek out da answer
    that yet i know of so in da hour glass from da tolet i seek da truth da
    answer whewwwww!


    lol ..............what a way to find out what need to be known !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol....well sometimes ya gotta do what ya gotta do....
    crack the window a little
    and here some air freshner too...... :kiss1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz peace & blessings outside the bathroom and mental mind
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So many questions that lay in the mind, sometimes we even have to call on the souls of our ancestors for their wisdom. But I'm happy to know that the answer is appearing clearer, amid the mirror. And, on a side note, sometimes that bathroom throne can be the most comfortable seat in the house....lol. Flow on.....
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved how you posed this, laying out all those questions and then really getting in to the flow. great piece
     
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    thankz watz ya right it can be the nice spot to sit until it blow ...lol

    thankz phenomenal indeed i was make da twist affect from da bathroom
    before exploding
     
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