Quiet Poetry Lounge : Should I or Shouldn't I

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by choclatangel, Mar 29, 2008.

  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Should I or shouldn't I
    I just don't know
    Thought we could grow
    But that was before you crushed my dreams
    Dreams of WE...you and I
    Thought we could stand the test of time
    Create something heavenly and devine

    Should I or shouldn't I
    Still feel that tingle when I hear your voice
    Smile when someone mentions your name
    Just the thought of you calling makes my day
    But on some level I'm still afraid
    To let me love you again

    Should I or Should't I
    Forget all the hurt and pain
    Think about the sunshine after the rain?
    Got me feeling like I'm going insane
    Can't seem to maintain a clear brain
    The protective layer I built for my heart
    Took years to build but only a moment to fall apart

    Should I or shouldn't I
    Should I or Shouldn't I
    Should I or Shouldn't I
    Let you back inside
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    reflect and allow the true you and your heart answer.....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Isn't it just that way, what took years to build, only takes seconds to tear apart... Too bad we can't think of that before doing something foolish. Do you still want this person in your life? Intense scribe.
     
  4. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the advice Rich and I just don't know Watz. If I did I wouldn't be so confused writing poems at 3:00 in the morning. :)
     
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