Black Poetry : Shorty's persistence

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I notice her watching me
    walking by me with her eyes locked on me
    If I were single... the thingz I'd do
    But I turn around b4 she brings me to do
    something stupid out of lustful temptation
    Losing love and dedication
    from a 5 minute sensation
    its not worth the pain nor the frustration
    So I walk away without strain or hesitation
    But she follows
    callin out "excuse me" I hear the echo thru these hollow
    hallways. So turn around say "yes" and swallow
    She smiles and Im nervous like an act at the Apollo
    Beads of sweat appear and she asks for my math-e-matics
    she says "nice to meet u", reaches her hand out n Im scared to grab it
    But I accept her greeting. I dont say much so the convo is a bit stagnant
    thats when she asks for my number and gets curious about my status
    shorty fyne like wine
    but i gotta take my time
    cuz she look like she ready to sell herself to me like an auction
    So I sit up str8, smile, and say with caution
    "im happily taken"
    but i dont think its makin
    a difference, cuz shorty starts shakin
    her head
    grabs a piece of paper and pen
    writes down her number and then
    slips it into my pocket
    i take it out n drop it
    i told her i like her style n im not tryna knock it
    but i gained love in my life n ill be [email protected] if I lost it
    she picks up the paper
    and tells me to save it for later
    I tell her I wont need it
    i'd be a fool if i even considered it, let alone cheated
    she takes a deep breath and then she said it
    "I can throw this number away, but in 3 weeks ima regret it..."
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My hat's off to you...in today's world, any man that can resist temptatiion is indeed a wise man. What can you regret in 3 weeks ? you know what you got, but...do you know what you're getting ??
    Oh I really enjoyed reading this and hoping that there's more men out there who feel and act as you do.
    keep it comming...
     
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    str8 tyte indeed one whom can walk by it is wise and real
    feeling u on this flow
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wise decision. They'll be many who are attractive, but is it worth ruining what you already have? Indeed not. I liked the flow.
     
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    thanks yall

    lol... sorry i didnt mean to fool u but Im a girl. but much love n respect...
     
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    I'm definitely feeling this ma. Love down below for the moment, that's whassup.
    ~Dior
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Woah I'm really feelin' this piece right here do ya thing NEVER CHEAT it ain't good for your health:lol:I'm playing flow on now do ya thing
     
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    MMMMMMMMMMMMMM
    VERY DEEP FLOW SISTA!!!!!!!!!!
    VERY WISE!!!!!!!
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!










    :wave:
     
  9. NicoleM

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    i like this...only a woman really knows how a woman flows when she is on the creep...women will say anything to a dude to get him to give in...there's nothing like a challenge (your ending) to guarantee a man will start thinking about you...the power of suggestion...nice work
     
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