[before]
i'm
impressed with
the way you
wrestle winds
and the power of you
shaking ill-will
from the four
corners of earth.
u are
something
cosmic...almost
abstract, but
definitely here...definitely
leaving marks and
impressions
across my
mental.
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[after]
(haiku)
i can smell souls press'd
against the roof of your mouth
so much death-i'll cry
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(sonku)
what reason
cud i give
for movin
on? u
seemed ready
to hitchhike.