Black Poetry : Short MULTI-RHYME

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Short MULTI-RHYME

    My verses disperses like the grace of mace a liquid tear gas
    That’ll make you fear fast and sincere blast eyes and trash
    Goals, so strap mask on and rap pass the zone of stupidity
    Make demands to avoid fake plans in the air bad humidity
    Face feeble attacks from illegal contracts have to duck down
    Or get struck by clowns throwing pen and paper at me renown
    See pictures under pages as scriptures thunder stages and pound
    Microphones and leave towns and home battered and shattered
    Stuff carry the pains and the very rains of hurricanes debris scattered
    Cats try behave brave and see grave changes that rearranges their life
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your rhymes are used with much thought-provoking essence. My goodness! The pictures one sees as they read have just as much impact as the rhymes themselves. :sand:

    -joyce
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was off the hook bruh MADD
    nice flava
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REALLY APPRECIATE TH EPROPS ON THIS ONE FOR REAL YALL
     
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    Just lable me the "whiper slash"...
    the girl that takes no trash

    hurricanes have nothing on me
    pull my strings ...you'll see

    What? ...did I push your elevator
    you're dealing with someone ...a little greater

    tight piece poet, I enjoyed flowing with it, drop more..it's been real
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Most of your pieces flow quickly, but this one soared, don't know if it was the rhymes, or the structure, but yes there was something about this one that as Joyce said, made you see pictures. Flow on.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE LOVE ON THIS ONE YALL FOR REAL YO
     
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