Black Poetry : Short Freestyle

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Mar 20, 2002.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Short Freestyle

    Hate to mention that attention is a factor in learning
    Brains burning Ebonics like an atomic reactor churning
    Chronic as a tractor, sweet candies or panties heat
    Hot Showers and flowers pots are like nannies complete
    Invitation to parties, bodies in devastation as they dance
    Advance without hesitation to a romance but love inhance
    A thug circumstance cough and sneeze then squeeze soft
    Like charmin tissue not alarming the issue or the cream between
    The coochee lips, nips juicy, flips the smoochee kisses it seem
    A pretty girl in a world shitty could end up in a dangerous city
    In a committee of thugs with slugs and kitty litter what a pity
    Mini-skirt pulled up thug bull doing plenty work on top
    Stop the flirt any screwing will do the trick alert and hot
    Coffee perk in the pot cum streaming in the G-spot
    Took more than ten minutes in it while screaming a lot

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADD...

    Ya laid it down straight :hot: like that bro!!!

    :confused: Why don't you step into the Spoken Word Forum and drop something on us?:confused:

    I for one would like to hear ya spit some :puke: ILL ****!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "love inhance a thug circumstance..."

    hmmm.

    keep flow'n, brutha...i'll keep reading.

    MADDlove.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hot off da press
    MADD freestyle
    be da beat ..........man dis was tyght !
     
  5. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ, baller and $$RICH$$ thanks for responding to this and yall say it wasa hot think i should've made it longer for real yo thanks again
     
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