Quiet Poetry Lounge : SHORT FLOW

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sheikdadon, Aug 30, 2006.

  1. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEEN XPEREECN ISOLATION N PAIN THRU OUT DA YEARS
    REACHED OUT N GOT ***** N HUMILIATION 2 WIPE DA TEARS
    ROUGH, GRITTY, POPPIN, READY LIKE MY TIMBERLANDS
    WE GRINDED THRU DA SEASONS DODGIN DA COPS N DA AMBULANCE
    WALK WIT ME N MY TIMBS;WE GOT DEM TREES OUTSIDE
    PEEP HOW I SPIT DIS(PAUSE) LYRICAL VERSE
    LET IT SOAK N YA BRAIN 4 SUM YEAH DAMMIT I NO A DOSE OF IT HURTS
    2 B DRUGGED THRU HELL MONGST OTHER LESS TOLERABLE THINGS
    WARIN W/IN YASELF WHILE CONQUERIN SOCIETAL NORMS PLUS DREAMS
    ACLIMATED TO THE LIFE BUT GOTTA RELEASE N LET IT GO
    SOMETIMES PRESSURE MAKES DA **** RESIST DA FLOW
    TREAT LIFE LIKE WEED CLIP DA BUT N DUMP DA ASHES ON DA EARTH
    GOT ANGER N MA VEINS I CAN MAKE DA ATMOSFER A LOT WORSE
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this is dope but I see where you coming from.

    A ghetto philosper
    speaking of ghetto-side
    Gangstas grab their glucks
    only to realize
    that it ain't about that
    anymore

    we need a revolution
    yeah a revolution
    a revolution where
    it become safe
    to walk da streets again

    letting children play
    without being bothered
    not having to worry about
    drug dealers pushing
    sublimital messages
    that smoking dope
    is cool

    junkies not hanging
    on corners
    where liqure stores
    Gun shops
    and churches meet

    educators would teach
    not only educational stuff
    but how to survive
    in america
    after all it is a revolution

    we just can't find any solution
    of this MTV, BET constitution
    our resolution
    is becoming a prostitution
    of Bush's restititution

    how quick we forget
    the revolution
    where its cool
    just to call each other
    *****

    but the funny thing is
    the people who
    most talk about revolution
    are just talking
    not acting....

    what ever happened to the revolution?
     
  3. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** POINT TAKEN THAT WAS FIRE SON....

    U ASK WERES DA REVOLUTION
     
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