Black Poetry : short and effective part #1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deep_lyrikz, Jan 28, 2004.

  1. deep_lyrikz

    deep_lyrikz Member MEMBER

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    keepin it real and boggle the kinds of useless rhy
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    I got a 6th sense
    to rid the world endless epidemics of relentless offensive intentins
    but yall really don't listen
    and its hard to see the end so lets hit the beginin
    I'm hot of the porch and i jumped over the fences
    my words burn like a torch ima start a religion
    nah ima a rash and you cats is itchin
    Ima scrath the state on mc who imitates like they great but they really fake
    i cant wait to handle some weight or handle a case of handle a chase in a car with some dkz in my back tryin to bust cause im productive and black
     
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    Compassion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    skillz- I'd like to read more.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well pose'd tyte drop here flow on
     
  4. realrawism

    realrawism Active Member MEMBER

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    Young One, Strong One keep that energy productive. Keep your eyes open and search for things that give answers. Remain ready for whatever but create whatever you can to remain a voice. I'm feeling your words, eventhough i'm older, i'm still living through your words. Peace!
     
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