Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by moham, Jul 12, 2010.
You come closer
And I shoot back
Far ahead of me.
Hey moham great to feel ya flow this was to da point
thought provoking, indeed.
does "shoot" imply violence, or movement? a verbal exchange, or a to-and-fro interaction between intimate friends? so much that can be said about this piece. THANK YOU.
You have beautifully captured a universal simplicity. Masterfully written, thank you.
Thanks so much, baller and gogounited!
for me 'shoot back' implies both movement and not exactly violence but(misplaced) defensiveness. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me .
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