Black Poetry : shivers

[deepy]

who?
who is it?
the sound is familiar but I can't place the...
Who?
tones soft..melodic
what did you say your nam..
rushing through my inner self -
SHIVERS

Who?
the colors are rich, i cant place the...?
I remember
a face...touch...eyes...
I know we had, by the voice a connection
it seems like many years ago
that rich tone would cal..
Who?
who is it....?


shiiivvvvveeeeerrrrrs!

 

[HODEE]

Very nice Deepy

No where to hide when love calls your name. Even in a not so clear dream, you know who that was. The softness of the voice, the tone the sweetness in the touch.

 

[$$RICH$$]

dis was well pose'd u can't run or hide
when da rapture come looking very nicely done sis.

 

[watzinaname]

Can't get away from the aura of it, no matter what state of consciousness you are in. I liked the way you flowed with this, deepy.

 

[MzBlkAngel]

very nice scribe...flow on....