Black Poetry : shivers

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Aug 8, 2004.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    who?
    who is it?
    the sound is familiar but I can't place the...
    Who?
    tones soft..melodic
    what did you say your nam..
    rushing through my inner self -
    SHIVERS

    Who?
    the colors are rich, i cant place the...?
    I remember
    a face...touch...eyes...
    I know we had, by the voice a connection
    it seems like many years ago
    that rich tone would cal..
    Who?
    who is it....?


    shiiivvvvveeeeerrrrrs!
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice Deepy

    No where to hide when love calls your name. Even in a not so clear dream, you know who that was. The softness of the voice, the tone the sweetness in the touch.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was well pose'd u can't run or hide
    when da rapture come looking very nicely done sis.
     
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    Can't get away from the aura of it, no matter what state of consciousness you are in. I liked the way you flowed with this, deepy.
     
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    very nice scribe...flow on....
     
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    Ahhhhh! Very catchy Scribe!

    Had me askin Who is it!
    Loving it!
     
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    Wink

    Witty post, I enjoyed this drop!
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thank you all...
    releasing alot of the old to make way for......what will be
     
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    yeah...i know the feeling of voices from da past
    and how sometimes they can bring an unanticipated shiver....brrrrrrr
    nice joint...precise and to the point
    one love
    khasm
     
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    I absolutely love
    the way you captured
    that unsettling feeling
    or searching, while
    the mind is racing...

    Brilliant Peace!
     
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