Black Poetry : SHIP~O~HOY MATE!

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ova da seaz
    cross da oceanz
    of life
    i've sailed to u
    didn't matter what
    trials & stormy wave
    i've faced da uncore
    sailed through my
    thoughts u where my
    guiding light in the
    line of battle ships
    in da windy sea of love
    blowin wit all it's might
    i didn't love another
    behind your back my
    heart stayed true to u
    taken da blast
    shook and rocked
    i sailed proudly wit flicked
    woundz and glazed scars
    for da mothership
    part of me live deep aboard
    a part of me lost at sea
    crossing into da ocean
    theirs a new beginning for me
    i've gut out tears and laced
    pain like it was mines to keep
    this long journey i now see da
    shores a habor to dock my heart
    to rest my soul of armor i've
    battled under starz and from
    burnning sun rayz instill my trust
    this old ship may be and may have
    but surely it's not defeated .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the vibes i get of this leaves me sorta speechless
    but i see the love of bond there and feel it
    just a storm and it will pass soon
    i took this poetic trip with you
    likes how you laid it to the canvas
    your mind is very creative and i love it!!!!
    now come on home....QQ

    :heart:
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we rise we fall
    we see we don't see
    we love we forget
    we visit we move
    not in defeat but when it's time .
    Thankz for the read sistah Angel
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this theme of staying constant and true. I am like that too, $$RICH$$. This is a beautiful flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no matter what if we stay true to our self indeed we are true to others
    stay the way u are forever .....thank u sista Gempis wuv u deep in my heart
    :thanks: :toast:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww
    I wuvs you too, cutie :grouphug:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your welcome...just loving ya pen!!!
    we fall we rise
    we dont see but see
    we forget but we still love
    we move we grow
    all in all we stay true to thy self
    no matter the shift turn
    indeed....:wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz sistah Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your beacon of light
    remains in view
    Still shining bright
    with love for you
    It glistens through
    the chaos and all the pains
    It glows no matter how
    hard it rains
    The beacon has remained
    true to you for sure
    And feels what it is you've
    had to endure
    Now that you've seen the shore
    time to follow your fate
    and coast right on in
    Ship o hoy mate
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow......watz thank u so much ya far to kind ! wit great vision
     
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