Black Poetry : shinin star

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  1. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the future is bright
    luv is in sight
    our black pearls
    spread thruout the world
    shinin like stars
    lettin em know who we are
    findin their glorious paths
    never forgettin the lives of the past
    makin waves
    breakin barriers
    turnin lifes page
    lightin the fires
    creatin the storms
    showin the world it still exists
    that is black rage
    openin eyes
    revealing lies
    gettin up in the devils face
    allowin the spirit to soar
    for it is not the swift who shall win the race....


    i just watched my six year old graduate from kindergarten and i want all our babies to know that i believe in them and they have my undivided attention...i luvs the kidz yall
    :star: :star: :jumping: :jumping: :wave: :wave: :luvv: :luvv:
     
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    I'm feeling this piece! nice scribe! Watching our little mini-me's evolving slowly in to adults is surly a blessin
     
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    likewise ..............the future is before us
    the children ...........watching from above
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am feeling this too!!! U are right cypher, let the children know they are the stars, they must shine...
     
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    this is so sweet and beautiful.....:)
     
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    its easy to get caught up in lifes struggles but we must take time to show our future just how fabulous they truly are...one luv yall
    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :star: :star: :star:
     
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    You know, if we just take a minute to see the innocense of our children.... how open they are... a smile starts to take over our life. Children are truly our future. Teach them well your dreams and aspirations that they may follow in your footsteps.
    :laugh: Mine, they chose their own directions... One always in harm's way, sayin' he gonna get out... I'm still waitin'.... but I'm still a sucker for his smile, and the sound of his laughter... although, his lifestyle makes me angry...
    Kindergarten... the wonder years, cherish them.
    You brought me a smile...
    :heart:
    Thank you for the this gift
     
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    Hi,

    This is a beautiful and sweet poem. I love it. I am so glad you shared it with us!! That is a wonderful thing, watching young lives blossom. I wish them all the BEST!!

    ~Sierra~ :)
     
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