Black Poetry : Shhhhh....

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Music moving with a
    smooth gait across her
    sense of HEARING
    aurally delicious she says
    and I tongue tip her
    ear lobe to chase the
    next rhythm in...

    "what are you doing"

    shhhhh.................................

    she swings her pelvic region
    side to side.....held hostage
    by a sound of jazz coated
    in cinnamon notes....it must
    be Miles....she whispers
    as her tension is seen
    miles away from her body
    ...lost in her relaxation
    My fingers dipped in
    aloe draw cool lines that
    parallel her anatomical
    existence....and her/she/
    mind flinches

    "what are you doing?"

    shhhhh...............................

    to create beads of sweat that
    want to run free on your palette
    you have to be subtle in the
    things you do...yet deliberate...
    I was as I care-ssed the impression
    just above her hip...and her beads
    began to beg to taste me

    "what are you doing?"

    shhhhhh.............................

    I counted each bead I boarded
    on my tongue to transport them
    to a palette...waiting...to let her
    manifestations of anxiousness
    run free beyond the playground I
    call my lips....

    I whisper "what are you doing?"

    shhhhhh...............................

    she said "I'm releasing my
    thoughts to you...let them
    play..."

    shhhhhhhhhhhh..................


    (c)2001 blakverb "off da top thinkin' "
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "TIGHT" does not even begin to describe the THONGS you have laid down on this page!!!

    This schitt is from the purple planet...because you...Master poet that you be....are definitely out of this world!!!!

    *shhhhhhh* ;)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well scribe

    laid out the crown
    u totally earn it......super piece..:D
     
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    Wow.......

    That's all I can say blakverb, just wow. :)
     
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    My RoYaL BLal-NeSs....

    shhhhh... don't say a word... just sit there &
    let me tell you how much i loved this piece! :)

    & this line... is "pure" :wink:... it made me sigh...


    OneLuv.
    Queen SunShyne~ :)
     
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    I gotta...

    ...quit goin' away for so long; then again, I'm always raised to new heights of amazement when I return... :heart:in this right here, Mr. Verb...:D
     
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    Blak

    I was so satisfied after reading this. You have me totally mesmerized. I's in poetic love:love: :D

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    hey you got any more room on your mantle for another "Poetry Grammy" ?

    mad tight poet...you've pierced the veil...
     
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    Blak

    **** this tasted good.

    whew!

    'shhhhhhhh'



    a
     
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    mmmhmmm... i'm still lovin' this!! & feelin'
    inspired by it!! thanks beautifulBLakMan.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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