Black Poetry : Shhhhh

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  1. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shhhhh
    hush now
    love finally cried herself to sleep
    and i don't want you to wake her
    she's been pining for you
    for quite some time now
    at last
    the final tear has dried
    the hiccoughs did subside
    now love lies
    curled on her side
    in sweet repose
    and only i know
    how long she wailed
    till fatigue prevailed
    now hush...
    let her sleep


    c. 2003 Brandi N. Rainey
    All rights reserved
     
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    This is nice She' but you know they want let love sleep. I love this!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all in a hush !!! love sleeps ...............tyght vibe
     
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    it seemed like love wailed
    for eternity
    inside of me
    which made me leary
    about dehydration
    since used like a mason
    in ed poe's the black cat
    will some supanat
    forces
    quench loves remorse and
    set things on their course and
    free me of this curse and
    let loves living agony submerse in
    a flowing pool of true happiness
    or will it keep tapping this
    section of my soul
    that makes feel incomplete
    if love is losing this battle
    i hope that it's not to proud to cheat...

    tight joint
    peace
    khasm
     
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    love it clinched
    and cried until
    it lost it's way and
    lost it's will
    and now with bones
    dried and dead
    would rather be
    alone instead.....
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed this piece.
    It has an original take.
    Great scribin.

    *Emma*
     
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