Quiet Poetry Lounge : shhhhh!!!... in my hush

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I sit here
    in my hush

    da quiet moment
    of my thrust

    soft alf
    jazz low tune

    now sweet hush
    within da room
    da lights dem
    candle a glo
    shhhhh!!

    as i flow

    my mind at blank
    whispers
    my ears spank
    da quiet notions
    in my motion
    i sit on da floor
    beckon 4 more

    so open my heart
    is crying
    deep inside
    my love is dying
    to caress da hush
    send me in a rush

    shhhhh!

    can't u see
    all i ask
    is let me be ....... inside my hush .......shhhhh!
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UUUMMMM, I love this one, my hush is where I love to go for peace and joy and troubled times, all three. Very beautifully and softly said.
     
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    yes indeed, sometimes all we need is the hush without the hustle and bustle of the world....yet sometimes the outer silence exposes our lack of peace inside...all I need, all we need is the hush inside.

    lo'
     
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    tight and right. feeling this sensual flow.

    BE
     
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    true artist. so much can be said with very little word and u spoke to my very soul ....... tis indeed profound
     
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    indeed it is within da hush of ya own space ....
    poetically speaking out ...thankz family 4 da read
     
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    campbell...thankz indeed we fine da moment in da
    room of silent and da whisper of hush that captures
    what we have is thoughts . glad u feel dis piece
     
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    silence is golden...
    how else can you hear
    God?
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    indeed wild when thing come to a hush
    in the silent whisper he speaks to us
    indeed u felt dis here ...
     
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    i could read this over and over and over and over ..... such a lovely place to be within oneself ....a place of solitude and serenity .... in silence of that which brings u joy
     
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