Black Poetry : Shhh... (erotica)

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  1. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shhh… hush baby
    I need silence,
    Just watch me
    As I spin my Bic,
    Composing a love poem for you
    Understand…
    This is out of my normalcy
    But…
    My fingers won't let me write of hurt and pain
    Since you've placed your mat on my brain
    And sleep on my mind,
    Causing the corners of my mouth to upward curve
    Observe me express my feelings in verbs
    Straddle behind me,
    Place your chin on my shoulder
    Rest your hand on mine as I scribe words of affection
    Shhh… no need to thank me,
    I feel your gratitude from your rising erection
    Beats from your heart pierce through my back,
    And rest upon my chest
    Sensations travel through my veins southward,
    So I write sentences describing my moistness
    A simple love poem
    For you, my soul
    No metaphors, no similes, or particular structure
    Just a few words to let you know that…
    I'm thinking of you




    (c)2002amberly
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmmm!! erotic pen flowin'
    showing compassion .....Think on !
     
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    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is one of the best, simplest, and most tastefully done erotica poems I have evere read. Amberly you have a gift for just spinning a gale of words so artfully and flawlessly. This was a wonderful read. Great job.
     
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    Now where have I read this before? Niiiice, Am. Very nice!

    Serenity...
    She
     
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