Quiet Poetry Lounge : she'z got luv 4 him

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzNappi, May 5, 2001.

  1. MzNappi

    MzNappi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the kind of luv that happenz
    like the buddin of spring flowerz
    the kind of luv that makez hourz
    turn n2 dayz
    & yearz

    & then their laughter
    travelz down green pasturez
    pickin blossomz
    which r really the thoughtz
    of their lifelong

    sweet luv songz
    sang by birdz
    can only b heard
    by lover’z earz

    summer rain iz really
    the chilly mornin dew
    coverin their rollin bodiez
    bathin baskin
    & blessed by beauty

    she’z got luv 4 him

    piercin peacefully past hiz painz
    of previouz love-lust scernarioz
    thoze r of no issue
    & stemz no questionz

    she’z got luv 4 him

    and he iz confused
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzNappi~

    I can relate to this piece...
    And am diggin' the vibe you
    have here. It's a shame when
    you gotz luv for someone, and
    they are confused and don't know
    how to reciprocate that same love!

    Thanks for sharing this!
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzNappi

    I'm vibin with N2...it's a sad and hurtin feelin when you've got love for someone and it's not reciprocated.

    It's possible he was never shown love in his/her life, therefore has no concept on how to give back.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome poetic love surely he will love it
    tyte write
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    High time that he realize the beauty that lies before him, wonderful write.