Black Poetry : she's taken

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Apr 16, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    maaannn go ahead and look
    i ain't mad
    as a matter o' fact i'm glad
    you're saying "daaaamnnn she's badd"!!

    but

    your situation's looking grim
    for this is one ocean you'll never swim
    and lights you'll never dim
    no need for a mustache trim tonight
    just you alone drinking miller lite at a bar drunk starting a fight thinking
    i wish i could be him
    now you're kicked out by a fat guy named slim

    i know you have fantasies of getting in between her thick thighs
    telling yourself lies
    like she reeeaallly stared you in your eyes making your little **** rise
    as you make your approach...

    dare you ask to cut in this dance
    there's not a chance!!!
    so electric slide or cha cha your *** outta this party in advance
    before i get in the southpaw stance like Roy Jones potna she's taken!!!



    cumpositions
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JP.


    :lol: hahaha... you are sumthin' else!!
    this is sho' nuff cute & i am smilin' fa real.

    once again you have brightened my
    mornin' lil boy!! :D

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man ..........u off da hook
    lovin how u slap dis one into motion
     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well ****...

    You came wit some heat wit dis!! I know this feeling!! I likes how you put in a flow Bruh!! Tyyyyyte!!:toast:
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    what cha' say potna

    you off the chain

    ;)
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    peach of poetry :lol:
    no my big head sis did not just call me lil boy?!?! :D
    your head is like whoooaaa
    nfinite love ya as you brighten my day too :cool:

    $$RICH$$,
    what's taking you so long to drop a rich one on us?!?
    xtra thanx for reading

    Rashad,
    :toast: man i know you can dig it.
    and an xtra :toast: for the future grand collab
    God holds the time on this one.

    poetic delight,
    don't want to keep remindin'em you're taken
    nfinite love ya' :wink:
     
  7. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, I cracked a rib on the "southpaw stance" joint. I like the storyline and the imbedded humor. Holla.
     
  8. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "cha cha your ***" ya killin me
     
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    stwberrydelight New Member MEMBER

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    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    absolutely :hot: my brother...
    You've done it again. ...And what a visual!!!

    Much :heart:
     
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