Black Poetry : She's Right

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  1. SoulVaccination

    SoulVaccination Member MEMBER

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    What's up world. This your boy David. Representing Mississippi. I been writing poetry for a month now. I wanted to post the first poem I wrote, but I couldn't find it so imma post the second one.

    She's Right
    I know a girl
    with all the right features.
    Brown eys, thick thighs, & a cute smile.
    She got long, silky, straight hair.
    When she pass by, I just gotta stare.
    She hate talkin gto other girls,
    cuz the spread her business.
    She don't wear name brand but she like nice things.
    She like footing games and boxing matches.
    She wanna be a model, but loves to sing.
    She got bot book sense, street sense, & common sense.
    Although she's not a virgin,
    she won't hav sex with you.
    She's likes shopping, phone conversations, & reading books
    If you find her make sure you tell her........................
    She's Right
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey Welcome :wave: to the family
    wonderful
    this is nice
    natural
    wonderful
    love this flow
    Peace
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee..:angel1:
    i like your flow..
    hope to read more...:wave:
    Enjoy :angel1:
     
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    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome

    Im feeling your flow, you must be talking to me(lol).
    Much love. Keep it coming!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bond
    tyte scribe flow head on ! welcome :spin:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  6. SoulVaccination

    SoulVaccination Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for da love. I been letting alot of people read my poetry at school. They been giving me mad love. Once again thank you
     
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