Black Poetry : SHES BACK, AND BY SHE; I WAS REFERRING TO ME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticManifesta, Jun 14, 2005.

  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The block is hot,
    My mind like jamacian police,
    has rid itself of the "blood clot,"
    Like the Big Bopper,
    I gotta come back large,
    make a scene,
    and see who takes notice,
    as i sit back relax,
    Meditate in the lotus,
    You thought I was gone for good,
    I been watchin the hood,
    see my Brother Rich,
    with his mean green Gangastalean,
    Hodee comin thru schoolin on "the game"
    I look around, and things seem changed,
    Nisa has departed,
    I must say she will be missed,
    If you dont stand for nothing,
    you will fall over simple ish,
    so I take stand against the block in the room,
    though after this poem,
    my poetry may be doomed,
    I wonder who will notice,
    when i give up,
    and leave the room.
    And hang out with James,
    in the forums all day,
    Talkin to Brotha Sun Ship
    about the chesapeake bay.
    Yea, my poetry may be doomed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i notice the plan
    and understand
    but ya poetry is flame
    bust like game staining
    da page so if u leave the
    room i'll notice ya move
    yeah she back on track
    by she , referring to thee

    well said and heard ..........
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps the poets
    will pick up the pace
    and add rhythms and
    rhymes and hit this space
    you're right this forum
    has gotten a chill in this place
    here's poeticmanifesta
    leading the race....

    Hopefully poet, hopefully...
     
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