Black Poetry : She's a Woman

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  1. Ujima

    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She can’t help it if she’s emotional, spiritual, perplexed, tired, overworked and undersexed, beautiful, convinced, envious, mischievous, some may even say she’s devious…She’s a woman.
    She can’t help it if she loves her man more than he do, breaking her back doing for her dude, always trying to prove her love is true, kissing his *** and all of his boo-boos…She’s a woman.
    She can’t help it if she has motherly instincts and the nature to love and nurture,
    learning about and loving her womanly culture, although some may call her an unstable creature…She’s a woman.
    She can’t help it when she walks by and catches every man’s eye
    because she’s so fresh and so fly and watching tear-jerking movies makes her cry…She’s a woman.
    She can’t help it if she is able to conceive, carry and bear a seed and on top of that, one week out of each month she repetitiously bleeds and still take care of her business and all of her man’s needs…She’s a woman.
    She can’t help it if she is awesome and wonderful, and yet still mysterious in all of her splendid bliss, with luscious full lips that are always down for a kiss…from her man that is…She’s a woman.
    She can’t help it if she’s phenomenal like Maya Angelou said and writes poetry as creativeness flows through her pen from her talented head and remembers every title and author of every book she’s ever read…She’s a woman.
    She can’t help it if she loves books, loves to cook, and can wear a sexy dress that makes her man do a double take and have a third, fourth, and a fifth look…
    She’s a woman.
    She can’t help it if she dreams of taking that long awaited stride to become her man’s bride, has earned her man’s love and trust and has nothing to hide
    and wanting the world to know she’s in for the long ride and knowing it was worth all of the tears she’s cried…She’s a woman.
     
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    nice drop
    likes this one as well
    flow on
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done tyte scribe
    but do slow down and share some love to other poet's
    u have 5 posts up on the front page
     
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    I'm lovin' this. U really emcompassed a REAL WOMAN.
    Good work. Reel tyte flow.
     
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    Welcome to Destee

    Ujima.. I like the way you flowed with this. I Enjoyed reading it.
     
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    Wow..this was a wonderful flow talking about the good bad and inbetween of being female...keep flowing.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Now this is exactly what I see in a woman. This piece me feeling all emotional. :bawling: :cry: :D

    Come to voice chat. We'd love to hear you read this piece....and any other pieces you're willing to share to the family.

    Great job. Keep it coming.


    :toast:
     
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    re: hi

    good-evening ujima,

    nice of you to visit today and post a new piece...


    READ BELOW:


    feeling your flow tonight young man... i mean us men, do love the ladies... i know i speak for many and there is nothing more beautiful then being next/beside one's nubian queen... indeed she is a woman/lady...

    keep writing young man..

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
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    WOW, Y'ALL ARE GONNA MAKE ME CRY!

    This was so sweet , so wonderful for you to honor us this way.
    It needs to be sent to every man in the world...LOL! After copyright
    of course...this was just so incredibly beautiful and well written and
    oh shoot, I'm gushing and I can't see cause I'm crying , cause
    I'M A WOMAN...THAT'S WHY! :spin: :spin: :spin:
    LOVES YOU FOR THIS!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE! ;)
     
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    THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!






    thanks lordy..

    thank you for writting this piece "' U"'

    thanks you for seeing it like this...
    a story that goes way back....
    the way a woman is...and can be

    thank you for feeling us ....


    woman..



    Love L
     
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