Black Poetry : She's a liar...

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she’s
    a liar and
    a foolish woman
    too full of herself or
    frightened to
    admit…

    she’s lost without you

    the
    sun’s gone
    blue skies have faded and
    clouds hover above
    her
    sun rays
    only reflect upon lovers
    and she suffers at each glimpse of
    their togetherness

    loneliness
    has entombed her
    she’s chilly whether indoors or out
    day and night even when temperatures
    reach record breaking

    she

    is

    f r e e z i n g


    her
    tears fall like
    rainfall whenever she
    encounters lingering scent of you
    and her spent in the bedroom, bathroom, living room
    in
    every
    single
    room
    christened
    in the name of a
    ‘soul deep love’
    and like a shrine she enters each
    kneeling, inhaling and worshiping EVERY **** image
    that daily ritual brings

    and…

    when
    compelled to step
    outside amongst scrutinizing eyes
    she
    prances in her
    prefabricated glow trying
    to convince those
    around her

    she
    hasn't
    missed
    a
    step
    without
    you


    all
    awhile
    inside
    she's tripping
    and
    crying out in
    agony

    since you…

    the
    sun's
    been
    gone

    and

    she’s cold…

    soul
    cold




    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow !!!!
    all i can say this was on hit poeticly
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Whew, Coco! This was some Dorothy Moore/"Misty Blue" kinda poetry!

    I really enjoyed this!

    Your pen was inspired in this!
     
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    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dig it i dig it
     
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    Nice flow sis Cocobutter, something of an unrequited love about it and the 'coldness' left inside.. Flow on sis :)
    Peace
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes simply admitting what is can begin the flow of peace. I appreciate you guys for taking time to read and respond. Thank you:)


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    felt this souldDeep. thanks for the scribe.
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're welcome Randee...

    And I 'preciate you coming through to show a fellow poet some love... BigTime!:)


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Wow...this was deeply seated...I felt your words...that's talent.
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sista'...

    you know i'm a fan, ryght? i'm lovin' it, girl. i like tha' flow...i can feel the broken heart beat on this piece moving softly to a cold lovesyck-rhythm. it's funny how love can affect, coco.
     
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