Black Poetry : Shenu kalun Renuk (what is your name)

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  1. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Li Hassa' (for now)
    Can I call you
    Neter-ee?(my god)
    I know you'Re waiting for me
    to get it together
    and see what you see
    when you look at me....
    From the INSIDE out
    without
    question or doubt...

    I allowed MAN to sit
    where GOD should be
    and he made a beLIEver out of me..
    I GAVE him the power to be
    DEITY
    crushing me...
    .......successfully
    but

    Pa Neteru (the gods in my mind)
    fi a'gulee.

    SAVED ME

    Yaa Neter-ee....
    Antuk atha fa sabur karnee(you are so patient with me)
    wa jed yamasee(and very gentle)
    nuk a’wuz liyya sarur...(I want to please )
    THEE
    in every way
    I can....can I?
    Yeah...
    I played the fool
    3rd eye covered
    by fear
    now clear
    I see
    what nature wants
    for me
    (right knowledge)
    your tone surges through me..
    Like..
    some kind of HUMBLE roar
    nu kind of sustenance...
    I want murr..

    Ansurnee(help me)

    free me
    make me
    heal
    remove all shame
    and RE-MEMBER
    the REAL.
    I know that PTAH....
    which
    Lead me to this attraction
    much more than temptation
    I call you
    SATISfaction
    giving me
    what I KNOW
    I need
    Yaa...Aswud Re...(oh dark son/sun)
    Nurture the strength in me
    In Supreme
    Darkness
    we-ality
    ...................continues...
    I feel you in me
    yet ..........I CAN'T WAIT TO!!..
    Li ya’sub
    I know...I KNOW
    clear sight...
    When the time is right

    wisdom says
    now!!!

    SO....

    slowly....
    ........surely
    dam shil damee(blood of my blood)
    we dance
    to this
    sacred rhythm
    constant movement
    ever flowing....
    Changing
    growing..
    As we reach
    that

    Ultimate Abode

    TOGETHER...

    we come....
    .............in PEACE.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow here i like
     
  3. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tawuhaat JED katur (thanks very much)
    mzblkangel... I appreciate your read and comment.... :wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Amen to this flow
    love it nice scribe
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Sunkissed Great to see you around again!

    There were so many elements in this piece that I enjoyed
    I would end up reciting the entire piece...this has such
    rhythm such depth....I truly loved this journey....

    Beautiful composition!
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear $$Rich$$
    Your read and comment mean a lot....
    Nuk Bi-Ya'sub hasus zi (I really appreciate it)
    Tawuhaat (thanks)


    Dear Angelicsage
    ADUB! (respect)
    What kind words...THANKS!!
    Nuk hasus antut...li ya'sub! (I appreciate you...for real!!)
    barakaat (blessings)