Black Poetry : She'll luv u so fast!!!

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Her eyes are like sparkling jewels
    she'll make men into fools
    She'll love u so fast, but it wont last.

    She's unbearable
    her lying is terrible
    She isn't faithful
    but she's plenyful
    She'll love u so fast, but it wont last.

    She'll wear u out
    she'll kiss u with her mouth
    She'll stab u in the back
    but u'll still come running back
    she'll love u so fast, but it wont last.

    She's hot like fire
    she's all of ur desires
    but... she'll love u so fast, but it wont last :luvv:


    :laugh: *~ Be careful wut u choose to do in life, becuz sum1 maybe followin ur footsteps~* :laugh:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This sort of love sounds like an addiction. Seems good to you, but not good for you. Feeling the vibe.
     
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    i met this chic b4...:lol:
    thank God i wasn't lookin for ish...*chuckle*
    nice drop...
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :roll: Loved this poem. A sistah was just talking to me yesterday about her brother who was hurt badly by just this type of girl.

    She's hot like fire
    she's all of ur desires
    but... she'll love u so fast, but it wont last


    Thanks for sharing your poetic insight.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wonder if this my brother's girlfriend.....:lol:
    then i wont have to put up with her long

    anyway nice scribe
    flow head on

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What some wouldn't give for a few moments of "deadly pleasure" ...so so sad.
    nice write, hope lots read this.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, I met this girl before too. :cool: What doesn't kill you makes you stronger, lol.

    Seriously though, this is a tight drop and I'm diggin it.
     
  8. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnx every1.!!! :luvv: :luvv: :luvv:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome love this piece u really did it up !!!!!
     
  10. angelicsage

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    so true poet....

    someone once told me...

    If it's Easy...it must be Sleezy... smh

    tyte piece...
     
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