Black Poetry : Sheet hung

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  1. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cold in every tense.
    shivering cold,
    molecules stroking my fear cold.

    please.
    let me go.
    what went wrong?
    whatever happened to powerful,
    strong, and invincible.

    help me.
    they're here, I know.

    run.
    a voice echoes from afar near,
    my legs won't respond.
    I struggle against cherry blossom
    memories returned,
    fresh as midnight vows taken in sin.

    her.
    in ether white,
    conjured up to stare me down,
    peel layers of me away;
    faint is how I felt
    defacated is what I did

    I threw up for a thousand lifetimes
    before it seeped into my head,
    almost as a thought she allowed,
    she wasn't staring at me
    never was,
    it was my alter,
    with me and not all at once.
    she licked my face,
    licked my feet
    drank deeply of my blood,

    like an orgasm spent upon a precipice,
    I plunged,
    destination certain;
    but the rooster drew the curtain.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very powerful piece of writing here YES!!!

    Dug immensely!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Jah

    Im wit Q... Powerful!

    Respect
    Reas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    droppin bombz

    very strong vibe u scribe here and i feel ya too !:eek:
     
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