Black Poetry : she

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thaCoolest, Jun 18, 2009.

  1. thaCoolest

    thaCoolest Member MEMBER

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    she dances on toes
    on pen heads
    the sugar plumb
    the fairy returns to dance in my head
    we do the father daughter dance
    our feet touch
    the fox trot we do in bed...
    i kiss her forehead .. say...
    "good morning baby... "
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello thaCoolest,
    Welcome aboard, I liked the toe-touching piece, hope to read more from you.
     
  3. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Short & sweet, sometimes the less you say, has just as much of an impact.

    Nicely done, ThaCoolest.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very endearing short piece that touch big & long