Black Poetry : sHE

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sHE slept left from right besides him. kept his ego warm and clothes pressed. fed his appetite and any request. his mold was painted gold despite his imperfections.

    sHE praised for his company and presence. yet the glory was too soon. opened heart for love, but received less than a friend. she was willing and able. she gave, but what did she receive?

    steps, far awau from self in order to meet him. expectations uplifted by reputation. but he couldnt keep them. and the way, the walk, the distance became greater.

    overwhelmed by new emotions turned sweet, yet eventually ended sour. mercy and grace carried her soul. faith and hope guided her heart. things will never be the same.
    things will never be the same. scarred by genuine concern. bruised by mistake to trust feelings supplied through relief. sustained with thought that positive will come. but things will always be different. now

    she was taken to a world that pushed her faith to the fullest. her spiritual connect to some limits. and bouncing back, the journey seems forgiven. but never forgotten.

    he took her heart and smahed victory on her emotions. caressed her body with devilish thoughts, yet claimed holiness. he kept her in a belief that change is possible. one day. but to late became too soon. he used his powers to infiltrate her thoughts. and left her in fear of love. but wiht hope she healed. and with determination love will return.her GOD has never failed her yet.​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt with this piece, as though I was taken through a journey. A journey through the expectation of love, the heartbreak, but then the rediscovery of self. Intricately posed poetess.
     
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    true dat , stay true to him for he will never mis-guide ya
    lovely flow
     
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    Oh my, how this speaks to lost and regained hope through the power of God!

    The sense of a renewed spirit is so strong in this!

    This read like a testimony for me! A story of coming out of the storm.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes it will return

    she will not be let down

    the spirit has a way of making things right again

    peace