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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She hides in my words
    I write
    and emerges a butterfly
    as she slip into my passion
    I remember
    when i creap into her spirit
    how attached i was of being alive
    I envision
    the only comfort was deeply in
    da touch of her skin we so mend
    I knew
    that our time has come in embrace
    for she live in my words uncovered
    That is
    where my heart beats indingo drums
    for my mandingo love dance
    Her eyez
    they peep from da O's of my soul
    a flickering sassy look outward
    I was
    then mesmerized under her spell
    so seductively taken in tyme
    upon
    Da cares of love to be found
    through her warm glow inside me
    uniquely
    we was mentally eterwined
    beside a fireplace tracing da beauty of
    life
    instill whereas i betray my own sight
    to see through her window of thoughts
    cascading
    our moment in tyme become my morrow
    for my love stood still that day !
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a sweet memory!

    I hear however, a twinge of saddness in your words...
     
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    Da memories i cherish
    to behold within
    yet sadness linger
    through my dying wish
    of she
    for time is displaying
    to a joy
    for soon i will be
    granted


    dat's when da heart speak i can't control

    Thanx for da visit and reading into me deep..wow
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It comes a time, when you have to grab that woman, throw her against the wall and say,

    "Hey Woman! I want you."

    and let the chips fall where they may.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmmm!! interesting ......maybe ya right
    but to express such with hands i can not do
    maybe i have a sweet gentle soft lovin way to get through
    and lay it out there ....yep and let the chip fall where they may
    good or bad and step strong ...hummmmm!!!

    Thankz for the advise
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your welcome

    You may need to work on being a little assertive

    for the passionate, assertive, and lovingly aggressive one

    wins tha race

    ...at least mine.

    softness provides wonderful coushin...

    but fire keeps the candle burning.

     
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    hummmmm!
    a strong stance
    da other side of me
    hummmmm!

    Thankz time i now reclaim my aim
     
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    Ahhhhhhh...

    $Rich$,

    You just are so dang romantic....I can't stand it. :love:

    lovely piece.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    Thank you my dear sis from da heart
     
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    something about her i can't shake off or let go !
    is it me just too sassy and sleep or have i become spelled bound !?