Black Poetry : She

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LyrikalShe, Mar 2, 2003.

  1. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She--
    the wind that whispers
    to the longing in your soul
    and regales it with tales
    of the love it could know...
    the candle flame whose
    incandescence lights
    the darkest part of you
    and allows you to once again see
    She--
    the essence that you
    breathe in like oxygen
    and leaves you lightheaded
    like absinthe...
    the portal whose gates
    are flung wide open
    and stands in the wait
    for you to enter
    She--
    me


    c. 2002 Brandi N. Rainey
    All rights reserved
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she.....
    whom open da
    eternal bliss
    of love
    she
    so pose of heart
    is like da whisper
    that breeze softly
    cross my face
    and thats when i
    see she......

    so gentle.....flow on poet !
     
  3. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very original poet.
    Likin this flow, keep it goin.
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Lyrkial. very nice piece, fancy seeing you here. great words displayed here. digging this flow!
     
  5. lil'MizzUnique

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    Yo i'm lovin that one ryte there..it was very unique
     
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    what an entrance, She.

    please, this one has my eyes open for you flowz..

    nfinite....
     
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    SHE touches on what HE wants to hear....
     
  8. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Nah!

    Nice to be reading you... I'd be lying if I said that this was anything less than lovely!

    Reas
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes Lyrikal you got down for yours on this one but I wouldn't expect anything less. Love the way you flow



    One
     
  10. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, wow! I'm flattered. Thank you so much for these words.

    Serenity...
    She