Black Poetry : She Wrote Me A Poem

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She wrote a poem for me
    A poem describing the respect she has for me
    …the friendship she shares with me

    She wrote a poem for me
    Of my sitting beneath an old oak tree
    While writing sweet words of poetry
    As the river sang nature’s melodies

    She wrote a poem for me
    Not only for me to read and see
    But to satisfy my requested curiosity
    She did this for me

    ~ Yes…she wrote a poem for me ~

    A poem of depth
    Where she dug deep
    …deep into herSELF
    To find the mountains
    Of reasons
    Of winter’s breezes
    Where the leafless trees
    Spoke to the seasons
    She wrote for me

    She wrote me a poem

    She’s an a-type personality
    Wrapped in an introverted mind
    She encompasses all that’s sweet
    All that’s
    True
    And
    Pure
    And
    Kind
    She appre-ci-ates the spiritual
    …The celestial realm of the heavenly
    But when my friend is feeling crossed
    The dark-side erupts all over me

    ~ Beware the sting of smooth verbiage wrath ~

    She wrote me a poem…’bout the depths of her soul
    …the affection she has for the young and old
    And all the things, in life, each one will search for
    Like happiness and love…and the joy we hope for

    She wrote me a poem
    (Coz I asked her too)
     
  2. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She "Wrote You Something". I had to reply. This was so thematic, particularly since I asked a friend of mine to write me something and I have yet to read her thoughts ... lmao

    This was a timely write. Much luv. Keep Cre8'in
     
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    lovealexandria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She wrote you something
    and it was quite divine
    the words pricked my heart
    like a porkupine
    full of the poisen
    of understanding
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this take the cake into a taste so sweet and devine she wrote you and u reply
    this was poetry in motion fo real....
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller:
    In deed she did.... and you responded
    in that beautiful baller way.



    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To have someone write a piece that digs fathoms deep...just cause you asked her to...certainly is a blessing. Enjoyed your heart felt expression poet.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And cause you's my soul-friend too!:)


    1Always!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this is hot man

    HOT! i felt this pure poetry baby

    i didn't know you were from Mississippi

    :spin:
     
  9. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's always wonderful to have friends...

    ...who enjoy the things you enjoy. who can fit seamlessly into your comfort zone...and come strong...when strength is needed. YES...she wrote me a poem. A WONDERFUL POEM. that's what friends do...the things friends need them to do. AND, I THANK HER...for being my friend.:)
     
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    AHHHHH...

    THIS WAS SUPER SWEET
    A SPECIAL TREAT
    A FRIEND OF YOURS
    GAVE YOU A GREET
    FROM THE HEART
    STRINGS ARE PULLED
    MILES ACROSS THE SKY.....

    HMMMMMM......
     
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