Black Poetry : she workin it

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Apr 9, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    her love came down
    call it thunder rollin
    thus upon my quaint position
    strollin to a core desire
    restraining fire juiced touch
    keep a constant momentum
    open exhaust to allow baited breath
    blown off passion venting
    ooo woman the way you shift
    must be a gift left unwrapped
    got toes playing air borne pianos
    lighting up my spine snapping
    yo love be the def beat
    told my soul shalom
    creating spacial quakes uncontrollable
    catching pleasure wreck in my own home
    sh-sh-shivering and it ain't cold
    holding on for escaping sanity
    told me not to move one inch
    and i don't plan to be
    oh then you smackin it up and flippin
    sista where you find dem skills?
    that screaming was my own
    110 degrees and catching chills
    with one slick move
    you brought your lips to mine
    held it down with one hand
    twisting
    circulating motion grinding
    ooo lawd how did this happen?
    trapped by my own play
    i thought i was hunting this mystery
    wound up the prey
    can't take this much longer
    got to get away quick
    went to run for freedom
    she saw that
    started stroking my d$ck
    asking if i can take some more
    hell... i can't speak
    she smiled and took it behind her head
    ohh...getting weaker
    if that wasn't enough
    just when i thought i was through
    girlfriend started backin it up
    umm...ahh...uhh...WHOO!
    if this be my last will and testament
    right know i don't know which
    let me state for the record this woman is working it
    leaving me on the bed like a limp *****...
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ha HA!
    *and that's all i have to
    say about that*
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Mercy!!! You topped yourself with this one hon. I was a slave to da rhythm! I laughed, I cried, it became a part of me. Derrick, thank you for this poetic tribute to "tha sistas with skillz".
    Peace and blessings in all thingz. Flow on.
     
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    Oh Yeah!!

    Happens Sometimes Bruh!! There are some Sistas who can work that thang!! Ya Heard Me!! Tyte Piece!:toast:
     
  5. Derrick Jay

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    its the best drug i know...and you can't od...lol

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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    tyte piece derrick jay.
    (no pun intended)
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DJ.


    umm... well... CLawd, CLawd, CLawd!!

    i'm kinda speech-less... but er uh... i just
    wanted you to know that i'd been here!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now Derrick Jay....

    that some hellacious workin' it bro!!!

    Serious. serious flowin'!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  9. MOCHAMADNEZZ

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    hey u, cum here a second, ive got a lil something i wanna show u..lol
    :grin:
     
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    Loved this.... amazing how phrases can spark it up inside... "soul shalom" got me reeeeeeal good! I'm with it like that, Derrick Jay!

    Dang that was good!

    alyce
     
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