Black Poetry : She won’t get off the phone…

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’ve been waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting.
    You know what I’m actually tired of waiting.
    I mean I come home I do my homework, I watch Brenda for her
    Even tho watching a 5 year old isn’t my idea of a teenagers
    Good time.
    I mean all she do is talk about how much my breast have grown
    Since I turned 13, and how she isn’t ready to have the talk with
    Me.
    AND she tells all this her friends, I can understand family but
    Friends?
    NO right now she’s talking to that man.
    I can’t stand HIM. HIM is the meanest man she has
    Ever brought home. HIM is nasty. HIM comes to the breakfast table
    With his boxers on and his nasty hairy chest staring me in my face.
    HIM don’t even stay here, but none of them do anyway
    So hey it don’t matter right?
    I’m gone go and there and demand my own line. I mean I’m 15
    Shouldn’t I have my own line? Tracie got her own line and she 4 months
    Younger than me.
    Yeah that’s what I’m gone do demand my own line.
    No I better ask because sometimes she be getting mad easily.
    Okay so I’m gone go in there and ask. Oh, wait I think
    She off. Yeah she got off.
    I’m jus goin pick up the phone…
    “Se-Se get off da dayum phone ya lil fast tail always tryin to get
    on the phone with dem pissy tell boys, I can’t wait,” click.
    You know what?
    She ain’t neva goin get off the phone,
    And I’ve been waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting…

    I wrote this when I was at the ripe age of 15, oh yes the good ol’ days, she just wouldn’t get off the phone, I loved her with all my heart anyway…
    :heart:
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS WAS FUNNY!!!! I ACTUALLY LAUGHED OUT LOUD. I LOVE THIS ONE.... :D ;) :cool: :D :D
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks gurl I thought it was hillarious when I found it lol glad you liked it
     
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    nice serenti...i love your patience in this one...:wave: :wave: :wink: :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u something else ..........i too was cracking up !
    love dis one ..
     
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    This is all of that! A first glimmer of the light that you possess-
     
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    cypher---yeah it was kinda hard but I kept my cool glad u liked it

    RICH---glad I got a lil giggle out of ya, glad u liked it

    poet---thanks for the compliment poet thanks for takin the time to read it
     
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    indeed sistah serenti..........
    this one had me all the way from start
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    always nice to know...
     
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    you had mad skill at 15
    i wasn't even putting words together like that
    i used to say that same stuff about my
    younger sister(get off da phone)...this piece brought a smile to my grill
    peace
    khasm
     
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