Black Poetry : She will remain nameless

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hisili, Oct 26, 2004.

  1. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This gurl I kno
    can stop time when she smiles

    This gurl I kno
    everyday her numba I dial

    This gurl I kno
    I wanted to take her home

    This gurl I kno
    had beautiful skin her tone

    This gurl I kno
    took away my pains

    This gurl I kno
    whose kisses kept me sane, melted tha ice in my veins, in my arms she will remain.

    This gurl I kno
    her very words were poetry to me

    This gurl I kno
    she had this voice that was just heavenly

    This gurl I kno
    just lip gloss no makeup not a blemish

    This gurl I kno
    her walk was mean and just so devilish

    This gurl I kno
    she broke my heart

    But this gurl I kno
    just lyk a dart, she pierced that part, she keeps my heart.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a wonderful poetic flow
    of that (nameless one)
    indeed this is very unique
    wonderful poem :)

    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is just straight up buttah. Great piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smooth tyte write here flow on !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thinking we have found someone perfect, and then they break our heart. I like the way you expressed this feeling. Flow on.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flowing i enjoyed this flow on.....Angel
     
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