Black Poetry : she whips me beyond all recognition

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Aug 2, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she whipped me
    beat me down...
    separated my atoms
    had me jumping around in essence
    upon oxygen exhaled from
    philodendrons
    celebrating her existence
    until I could mate with hydrogen
    and become the moisture
    along the creases of her african born lips
    she taste of a simpler form
    but the synergies of our
    energies reminds me that her
    beauty swallows the universe with
    it's enormity...and she is everything
    that is fine

    I walk past mirrors
    pondering who that is that I see...
    she needs to be imprisoned for the ways she beats me
    beyond all recognition
    with her wicked hip movements
    and back swings
    and...
    .........concrete moans that
    fall on my eardrums
    beating me into her rhythm...
    building visuals of her vaginal walls
    that encase me as if I'm in
    solitary...to dance to her breathing

    alone/yet with her

    slowly
    softly
    heavily
    beating me
    beyond
    all
    recog
    nition.

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang twin...you need some insurance after this one...Better call Geico...lolololol...

    Tight scribing twin...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hell i think verb need STATEFARM))))
    she do all dat to ya
    u gonna need a witch doctor to str8 ya out
    hahahaha.........where can i fine one at!
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sgp.


    **** you! i didn't plan on replyin' to posts
    til i got home from work... but!! i had to hit
    this one!! :lol: mmm mmm mmm...

    looks like you d'on got knocked the ***** out!
    ...on more than one occassion!! :lol: & it's all
    very very good!! :D

    mmm mmm mmm...

    alwayspeace&love, chile.

    elayne.
     
  5. Bert

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    Don't you just love a sound beatdown? I know I do!

    I like this heah, bro!

    Bert
     
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    I love reading these testimonials....

    It's so very rewarding to know that your lover is truly appreciating all your efforts to make it special; that your feelings are being properly understood; that your message is communicated, leaving no doubt.

    and it was good, too huh blakverb?

    alyce
     
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    Whoa.

    That opened my mind.

    Wherever u are now, brother blakverb, I hope you are still blessed.

    ~Ikoro
     
  8. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!!!
    This has left me speechless!!!!
    U hit the:bullseye: with this one.
    :welldone: :welldone: :welldone:
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got blakverb-word-vibrations all under my skin while reading this. Why don't you come home from time to time and shake us up? Just me missing your flow.


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    I'm with coco...you need to find yo way back to Kansas....
    OMG....nothin g like a little whipping from time to time.
    and then to do it "beyond all recognition" sound like my kind of whipping.

    coco we need to put an APB out for Verb...lol
     
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