Black Poetry : She was more then my Teacher

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She more then my teacher
    she was my mother soul
    guided my through da hardest hole
    showed me life and it's mold
    made me a man strong and bold

    When she teach the verbs & nonus
    words of comfort and melody soundz
    showed my math-o-matic to add & subtract
    pull my weight so i just don't slide by
    fed me wisdom as i learn knowledge
    then she set me off to da college

    she was a teacher like no other
    she was my humble lovin mother
    class started the day of birth
    so i could understand the true woman worth
    she never labled me and alwayz praised me

    Told me son go forth ya mind is free
    in this land of no truth and liberty
    i learn the values as man
    now upon my children i make a stand
    fighting the system of amerikan

    She taught me morals and respect
    how to love and forgive and forget
    making the grades inside the maze
    had this yearn and burning crave
    to write da words of life's goal
    treasure Queenz mo matter young or old

    She was more then a teacher
    and my inner deep speaker
    she was the heart & soul much deeper
    guided my life to do what's right
    place me unto da only pure light
    told me sir child never give up da fight
    and always pray each and every night

    O' how i can go on forever
    but for now i'll just end this letter
    she was more then my teacher
    she is my life long keeper
    and the one true resound believer


    I just wanna say thank u for allowing me to learn
    thank you for the depth of my great yearn
    thank you thank u thank u...ya lovin dear one!
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    thank u for being that friend
    strive with me from beginning to end
    reminding me when i stray unto sin
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwhh. This was so awesome. I like the way every write you show us a new depth of you. keep doing what you for you do it so well my brotha
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This read straight from the heart, quite touching brother poet, you've been blessed.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Rich, its been some time

    This is such a soul-warming piece.
    It stirs my heart and reminds me how
    wonderfully blessed I am to not only
    experience the receiving end of a mother's love,
    but also, the giving of it.

    Thanks for sharing your experience in receiving
    such incredible love and the wonderful impact
    it had on you. It was very much enjoyed!


    Maddsistahlylove!
    Coco:)
     
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    Thank you sister Asimplepoet i try to stay in the poetic game and with great writers as ya self

    Thank u watz it was a heart and deep feelings that scribe this one not me !

    Hey Cocobutter it's been a while but just upon ya return made me smile
    u been missed welcome back sis and thank u from the depth of my soul.
     
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